M. Wilson

I have a character who has multiple personality disorder. She developed them when she was very young (maybe around age 9). She was taken in at an early age by ...

The cramped walls of the underground walkway were rusted with a dingy brown, and the decaying pipes leaked moldy water that smelled of the same mucky waste someone would dispose ...

Ok,so my friend and I are collaborating on a story. The story revolves around the subject of war, and during the introductions we have established that our main characters have ...

Once again... amazing. You have a well developed writing style. You kept my attention from beggining to end (which isn't tha easy). I love the ending. It keeps you guessing...wanting ...

Well done. I loved the way you started the piece off. I personally think that a beggining paragraph is one of the hardest things to accomplish, because those are the ...

I like that someone actually wrote a story on m favorite avatar character. She's also one of he few villians I actually like, so thank you for this. Anyway... I ...

Interesting... I never really pictured Ed as evil, so this was a nice glimpse. But I am a little confused... is this supposed to be part of the main canon... ...

First i would like to say that, i like twilight, but do not love it-so there shouldn't be too much bias opinions, if none at all. Anway, I like the ...

Ok, so I’m new at this whole crit. thing, but here its goes. First: I think the story is going in a good direction, although confusing at times. By that ...

CHAPTER 1 Aftermath Two months—it’s been two months since the war between the two greatest countries have ended. Lots of people are recovering from those dreary times, some more than ...